Rationale: You keep referring to sociology which is a specific title and
discipline; you should use CULTURAL STUDIES INSTEAD
Rationales have no footnotes.
You need to say less about how the world works and more about how you
intended to incorporate the TWO titles you plan to have as your concentration
and how the courses you took (will take) fit and accomplish a degree in Cultural Studies with a concentration in African Americans Studies and Sociology. “VERY IMPORTANT!